You've done a very nice job creating a song that is very much acid house. The leads are interesting, and the sound fits the genre very well. All is well and good until about 0:25 when the bass comes in. Consider adding an equalizer to the bass to get rid of some of the higher frequencies in the bass sound so it doesn't clash with the leads. There are plenty of good youtube tutorials on this, just google "subtractive eq tutorials". What else... The drums are cool, so you've got that going for you! Try adding more of a set in stone chord progression into your music so that melodies can flow from that and it won't sound like a cacophony of noise with no real direction.
Improve your sound a little bit, keep writing music, and I'll check up to see if I want to scout you!